intention and arrangement

I think and write about the same, although when I think about things it's usually in lofty language and normally doesn't flow exactly like I want it to on paper. Therefore I think the required drafts and revisions where very helpful. The group workshop also helped in more ways than one as well. It allowed me to see how my paper looks and sounds from many different sources and angles besides my own. Furthermore it allowed me to change things in a constructive way that didn't compromise my tone or type of my paper. All in all I think because of these tools my papers clarity and flow have improved.